Week #3 Story: Rama and Sita
Authors Note: I wrote this story based on Rama and Sita's part A and B reading. The link and bibliography is at the end. I had heard the names and wanted to know the backstory between these people. It is a really interesting read and I reccomend it!
Rama and Sita Part A and B
This is a story of two kings who lived in a city full of
bright and happy people. The birds chirped, the flowers swayed, and the sun
shone brightly over the city. There is a king named Dasharatha who is sad
because he has no sons from his three queens. Dasharatha's decided to do
a Ashwamedha, or horse sacrifice, in order to have sons. The queens were
incredibly happy on this sacrifice and were full of hope. The kingdom eld
a ritual ceremony for the sacrifice upon its return. Kaushayla, the chief
queen began by slaying the horse. The kingdoms was filled
with celebration, chanting’s, and portions of the horse were thrown into
the fire as the chanting occurred. The Gods promised Dasharatha four sons.
These four Gods were oppressed by Ravana, and Vishnu divided himself into
four parts. The king then had four sons of which Rama was the most beautiful
and was perceived to have all the marks of Vishnu.
A few years later the young boys grew up to be fine young
men. Vishvamita, was a sage who wanted Rama and his brother's help from
devils (rakhshasas) who disturb their practices and put out their
fires. Dasharatha was devastated to know that Rama's life would be in
danger performing the task of having to go with the sage
but Rama's victory was assured by Vishvamitra. Rama walked ahead
to face a dark and fearfully haunted jungle.
Lakhshmana and Rama walked into the streets of a village alone
and explored the city after excusing themselves from the Sage. Girls from
the city saw the beautiful men and gossiped. Some said that the dark one was
good for Sita. The weapons which they worn, the pearls on their
dresses, and the masculine looks of Rama and Laskhsman gave them plenty of
attention. The two brothers bathed in a stream, and they plucked flowers near
the Kings beautiful palace and lake. Princess Sita happened to be walking
in the garden with her maids. The maid told Sita about
the youths and Rama knew by the Jingle of Sitas bangles that she
would be the one he would love eternally. Sita saw Rama there for the
first time. She prayed for the prince at the temple of Bhavni and
flowers fell into her hands representing the fact that her wish was
granted. She did rituals at home and Rama was restless all night as well.
Vishwamitra then indroduced the men to King
Jakata. Jakata took his bow and said whoever can bend this bow can marry
Sita. Rama stepped up and snapped the bow in the
middle. King Jakata was impressed and was ready to marry the two. He
sent messengers for Rama and Sita's marriage. Parashurama then arrived at
the scene. He was a tall and bulk man with a bow in one hand and an axe
over his shoulder. "His body was bare except for a deerskin cloth about his
loins. On his brow were marked three white lines that showed he worshipped the
god Shiva. His hair was
twisted in a knot." Parashuma was incredibly mad because someone
broke the bow. Rama cooled the hermit Parashurama down. The
hermit gave Rama the bow of Vishnu and it clasped as soon as it was
in Rama's hands. The hermit was in awe. He gave Rama and Sita his
blessings for the marriage. The village was filled with rituals,
ceremonies of the marriage, and high emotions. Rama and Sita had gotten
married. Rama's brothers found themselves brides as well.
Kaikeyi was Dasharatha's youngest wife. She was influenced
by the words of her servant. Her servant's name is Manthara. She was
described as goes: "Ugly and misshapen was Manthara; she was short-necked,
flat-breasted, and had legs like a crane; she was big-bellied and humpbacked. When
Rama was a child she had offended him and he smote her, and ever afterwards she
regarded him with fierce enmity." The nurse asks for Kaikeyi to ask
for two boons of which she was promised. Boons meant a promise. So Kaikeyi
asks her husband for Rama to be sent into exile and for her son Bharata to be
the heir as her two boons. Dasharatha was furious and upset at hearing
this. After an initial reaction of shock and anger he gave in saying "I grant the
boons, but I reject thee for ever and thy son Bharata also.”
Meanwhile, the city was preparing for Rama to be their heir. The celebrations had begun and he was being pampered. The chief counselor asked for Rama and Sita to walk in together for the ceremony. To quote, "his body was bent, his face was worn with grief. Tears fell from Dasharatha's eyes as his son kissed his feet and the feet of Kaikeyi also; he strove to speak while tears streamed from his eyes." Rama asked what the matter was and Kaikeyi expressed her wish. Rama didn't show how grief stricken he was. He said, “I will depart this day in fulfilment of my father's vow. Cheerfully will I obey his command. Let Bharata be summoned quickly from Girivrajah, and I will hasten to the jungle of Dandaka.”
Rama told his father he would be back
after 14 years. Kaikeyi brought a dress of bark for the three to wear and
argued for the soldiers not to go with them. Sita tearfully protested saying
"How
can I wear raiment of bark? I cannot use such attire.” Dasharatha looked
at his shameless wife and claimed Kaikeyi's command was only for Rama and
the bark dress was taken away from Sita. They reached Ganga river
together. There the King of Nishada fed them and greeted them. Sita
prayed to Ganga for a peaceful return after 14 years. Lakshman and
Ram vowed to protect Sita and talked about what happened before the
ceremony. Lakshman told Rama not to think on what happened and to stick
together
Hi Zille! I read the Tiny Tales version of the Ramayana, so the version your story is based on is different, and that is interesting to read! Since I did not read this version, I am not sure if you made any creative changes to the original or just retold it. If you did not make any changes, I would recommend that you try changing the characters, setting, or plot in future stories! It can be a lot of fun!
ReplyDeleteHi! I really enjoyed your story! It was very interesting to read. The only thing that caught my eye that is more of a cosmetic suggestion would be to have the whole story in one color font. Whether that be all black or all gray. Besides that, you did a great job of creating this story.
ReplyDeleteHi Zille!
ReplyDeleteI think you could make your Author's Notes much more extensive. Because I did not read the same version as you, I don't know if you changed any parts of the story or if you just retold the same story. It would be helpful if you could state what you changed in your Author's Note next time. I also wondered why the font is in different colors? This could be a good thing to check before you publish, because sometimes the color is different because you copied and pasted from somewhere else. Ultimately I think you just need to change some editing things.